免費修改留學申請文件_第四周幸運兒公佈

美國大學申請,美國研究所申請

College Admissions EssayBoot Camp (8)

第四周兩位中獎幸運兒的修改完稿已經列出於最下方,請大家下滑參考。想參加免費編修留學文件的朋友們,請參考活動辦法

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修改完稿內可以看見  1.追蹤修訂痕跡(輕鬆比對修改前後文),  2. 右邊是外籍編輯的整體評價跟細部評價(例如單字選用或冗句刪除的原因)。
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第五份文件:由編輯Gale修改

Comment:
Hello! I thank you for letting me assist you with the personal statement for your important application to UCL. I have made several changes to correct English usage and make several suggestions for changes that might add clarity and impact. I applaud your hard work and the well-focused steps you have taken toward the admirable goals you have established for your career and wish you much luck with your application! Please feel free to request me by name, if I can help you out in the future.

修改完稿:

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第六份文件:由編輯Micah修改

Comment: 

I thought the essay clearly and concisely gives your relevant background, and your interest in the subject clearly comes through.

修改完稿:
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