2017免費修改留學申請文件_第二周幸運兒公佈

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九月第二周過了唷! 已經有四位準備好文件的學生,成功抽到免費修改服務了!

你還在等什麼呢? 有抽,真的機會超級大!

第二周修改的剛好都是CV,很少有人會送CV修改,兩位的排版都做得相當漂亮,兩位研究經驗都相當豐富,履歷寫的非常完整也正確。

推薦大家可以參考看看這周文件的排版、字型與間隔等等哦!

 

想參加免費編修留學文件的朋友們,請參考活動辦法; 想看第一周修改的文件,請看這邊

 

修改完稿內可以看見  1.追蹤修訂痕跡(輕鬆比對修改前後文),  2. 右邊是外籍編輯的整體評價跟細部評價(例如單字選用或冗句刪除的原因)。

*修改標準為官網付費標準

 

 


第三份文件:由編輯Julie B.修改

Comment:

Thank you for using wordvice.com.tw.
The CV already had some comments from another person. I did not remove these comments. All my comments have JB before them so that you can differentiate.
Overall, your CV highlights your skillls and abilities very well. The changes I made primarily focused on changing the ordering of phrases, providing alternative word choices, and making additional suggestions to improve the flow of your CV. These changes were made with the goal of better highlighting your skills, abilities, and accomplishments.
Please view the comments I provided to understand why I made some changes, and to see my additional suggestions that may be helpful to you.

If you need assistance in the future, you are welcome to ask for me, Julie B., by name.
Thanks again!

學生心得:

非常高興能夠中選,我這次修訂的文件為CV,對我來說編寫CV最困難的就是在簡短的描述當中仍能強調出自己的優勢,常因為用詞或是語序失準而影響表達邏輯,而修編者Julie B.不僅抓出這些可能令讀者困惑的部分,也標出多處可以補充敘述、讓表達更完整之處。我在送修的檔案已經有註解上自己的疑問,而Julie也對於這些疑問也都有完整答覆。謝謝Wordvice提供的專業修編,這次的結果非常令人滿意!!

 

修改完稿:

Second-week_CV2_1709

Second-week_CV2_1709



 

第四份文件:由編輯Adem B.修改

Comment: 

Thank you for choosing wordvice.com.tw!

I edited this document for style, formatting, clarity, and reduced wordiness. In a CV, it is best to use as few words as possible for maximum scanability. Education, job experience, responsibilities, and achievements should be presented in a format that is clear and easy to read. I re-formatted the document and removed bulky phrases, giving the CV a professional and clean-looking appearance.

Please feel free to request me by name, Adem B., should you require editing in the future.

修改完稿:

 

Second-week_CV1_1709

 

 

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