修改完稿內可以看見 1.追蹤修訂痕跡(輕鬆比對修改前後文)， 2. 右邊是外籍編輯的整體評價跟細部評價(例如單字選用或冗句刪除的原因)。
Thank you for the opportunity to help you with your resume. It is very well-written, with very few errors. I did adjust some formatting to make it more readable and added your contact information and page numbers to the footer because yours is a two-page resume. Another change you might consider is choosing a different font, as Garamond italics is not very pleasing to look at or easy to read.
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Thank you for the opportunity to assist you with your resume.
I made significant changes to the document, predominantly in terms of formatting to improve consistency in form and readability. Please check the text carefully to ensure it has maintained your original meaning.
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