修改完稿內可以看見 1.追蹤修訂痕跡(輕鬆比對修改前後文)， 2. 右邊是外籍編輯的整體評價跟細部評價(例如單字選用或冗句刪除的原因)。
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The CV already had some comments from another person. I did not remove these comments. All my comments have JB before them so that you can differentiate.
Overall, your CV highlights your skillls and abilities very well. The changes I made primarily focused on changing the ordering of phrases, providing alternative word choices, and making additional suggestions to improve the flow of your CV. These changes were made with the goal of better highlighting your skills, abilities, and accomplishments.
Please view the comments I provided to understand why I made some changes, and to see my additional suggestions that may be helpful to you.
If you need assistance in the future, you are welcome to ask for me, Julie B., by name.
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I edited this document for style, formatting, clarity, and reduced wordiness. In a CV, it is best to use as few words as possible for maximum scanability. Education, job experience, responsibilities, and achievements should be presented in a format that is clear and easy to read. I re-formatted the document and removed bulky phrases, giving the CV a professional and clean-looking appearance.
Please feel free to request me by name, Adem B., should you require editing in the future.