2017免費修改留學申請文件_第五周幸運兒公佈(活動結束)

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最後一周的修改結果,因為長假關係,直到今天才公布。

本周第一份文件是申請博士的自傳,第二份是推薦信。自傳鋪陳了自己為什麼對於申請領域的啟發,最後自己做了什麼事情幫助自己更進一步,這些都是很好的事例證明自己相當清楚的自己的計劃,並逐步實現中。

推薦信則是多著重於該位申請者在工作或課業上有什麼傑出或特殊的表現,證明他擁有在研究所或博士念書的能力。

 

看看第一周修改的文件,請看這邊。想看第二周修改的文件,請看這邊;看第三周修改的文件,請看這邊。第四周修改文件,請看這邊

再次感謝每一位學生的投稿,我們很認真地挑選並希望給其他學生不同的文件修改當作參考。

 

修改完稿內可以看見  1.追蹤修訂痕跡(輕鬆比對修改前後文),  2. 右邊是外籍編輯的整體評價跟細部評價(例如單字選用或冗句刪除的原因)。

*修改標準為官網付費標準

 

 


第九份文件:由編輯Sangeeta修改

Comment:

Thank you for using wordvice.com.tw. Also, thank you for the opportunity to help you with your project. I have made many edits, including grammar and spelling etc. Overall, your document is well written.

If you require editing assistance in the future, please feel free to ask for me by name, Sangeeta. Thank you and best of luck!

修改完稿:

Fifth-week_SoP1_1709

Fifth-week_SoP1_1709



 

第十份文件:由編輯E.A.W修改

Comment: 

Hello-
Thank you for using wordvice.cn and for allowing me to help you with this recommendation letter.

Your points about the candidate are clear and well-defended. My edits had primarily to do with clarifying verb tenses, ensuring clarity, avoiding wordiness, and maintaining readability in idiomatic US English. If you have any questions about specific edits, feel free to send me a query using the message feature associated with this project.

If I can be of assistance with additional projects in the future, feel free to request me, E.A., by name.

Thanks, and I wish your associate good luck.

修改完稿:

Fifth-week_RL2_1709

 

 

 

 

 

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