2017免費修改留學申請文件_第四周幸運兒公佈

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活動來到了第四周,本周是最後一周收投稿文件,到29號之前趕快到臉書參加活動吧!

想要參加免費編修留學文件活動的朋友們,請參考活動辦法; 想看第一周修改的文件,請看這邊。想看第二周修改的文件,請看這邊;看第三周修改的文件,請看這邊

 

這次兩份文件都是履歷,給同一位編輯Amanda修改,其中一位的履歷進行了大幅度的格式修改,以提高可讀性。

 

修改完稿內可以看見  1.追蹤修訂痕跡(輕鬆比對修改前後文),  2. 右邊是外籍編輯的整體評價跟細部評價(例如單字選用或冗句刪除的原因)。

*修改標準為官網付費標準

 

 


第七份文件:由編輯Amanda修改

Comment:

Thank you for the opportunity to help you with your resume. It is very well-written, with very few errors. I did adjust some formatting to make it more readable and added your contact information and page numbers to the footer because yours is a two-page resume. Another change you might consider is choosing a different font, as Garamond italics is not very pleasing to look at or easy to read.

Thank you for using wordvice.cn. I wish you the best in your future endeavors!

修改完稿:

Fourth-week_Resume1_1709



 

第八份文件:由編輯Amanda修改

Comment: 

Thank you for the opportunity to assist you with your resume.
I made significant changes to the document, predominantly in terms of formatting to improve consistency in form and readability. Please check the text carefully to ensure it has maintained your original meaning.
Thank you for using wordvice.cn. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors.

修改完稿:

追蹤修訂完整版

Fourth-week_Resume2_1709

乾淨版本

Fourth-week_Resume2_clean_1709

 

 

 

 

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