2018免費修改留學申請文件_第一周幸運兒公佈

動機信(SOP),留學申請(碩士),留學申請資訊,自傳(PS)

免費修改留學申請文件

第一周中獎幸運兒的修改完稿已經列出於最下方,請大家參考!

想參加免費編修留學文件的朋友們,請參考活動辦法

參加辦法:

  1. 找到【Wordvice Taiwan臉書粉絲專頁】。
  2. 在此活動置頂貼文下方『按讚』並『留言』下面完整一行字:我要WORDVICE免費修改留學文件。
  3. 申請文件(SOP、PS、推薦信、履歷)擇一寄送到admissions@wordvice.com。信件抬頭: 臉書姓名_文件種類 例: Charlene Wang_SoP
  4. 以上步驟都需完成,才算取得報名資格喔。

 

九月似乎大家都還沒有準備好文件,參加的人還不是很踴躍,希望大家趕快著手準備申請資料,不要錯過這難得的機會唷!

修改完稿內可以看見  1.追蹤修訂痕跡(輕鬆比對修改前後文),  2. 右邊是外籍編輯的整體評價跟細部評價(例如單字選用或冗句刪除的原因)。

*修改標準為官網付費標準

第一周幸運兒使用感言

謝謝wordvice Gali L.專業的批改,自己寫好sop真的很不簡單,但是透過專業角度逐字逐句以及架構的分析,
可以更了解將來要如何改善sop和寫作邏輯,很高興把握了這次活動機會。

由編輯Gail, L.修改

Comment:

Thank you for using wordvice! Your statement of purpose has a good balance between stating your career and professional goals and describing your achievement, including showcasing why you will be successful in their program. I have edited your document carefully to eliminate errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation, while also refining word choice and sentence structure to improve clarity.

The second comment addresses the tone of the essay. My comment is a little long, but I would recommend you read and review the comment carefully and consider how you might make the tone of this essay more engaging and/or personal — perhaps by adding a greater level of detail in your description of your experiences and/or by explaining your personal motivations for your marketing philosophy.

Please let me know if you have any questions about these edits or comments. And feel free to request me by name (Gail L.) if you need editing services in the future!

 

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